I couldn't wait to go to South Dakota. We have been planning to go on this adventure for ages. One of the things I wanted to see was the land that's unique of all, the Badlands.
When we finally got there after the never ending car ride, we could see the Badlands welcoming us to South Dakota. It was an adventure to remember, we hiked a little while and took a mammoth load of pictures. After seeing the Badlands we saw many other things too. I can't wait to go back to South Dakota again to see more and the Badlands welcoming us to South Dakota again.
Good, but kind of short. What did you see in the badlands? What was your favorite part of the trip? How did you feel when you could finally get out of the car from that long car ride? How were you feeling when you left?
ReplyDeleteI liked how you described coming to South Dakota, but it was kind of short.
ReplyDeleteI think you should have made it longer. I liked how you said "a mammoth load of pictures".
ReplyDeleteI liked how you said how you took mammoth amount of pictures. You could of described what else you saw.
ReplyDelete